You do not have ... i am tired of hearing it! but she never stops saying that .. everyday , every time whether i am depressed or happy or bored or angry...her tone is as sweet as honey no variations whatsoever , whether its day or night .
I want to talk hence i call, want them to listen hence i yell. I have this dire need of expressing , they yawn they shout & hang up ,smirk or ignore but i never stop. i cant complain anyway its me who want to ! but since they do not bother i wonder whether she would , she hears me often yell damn,u***, what*** yet she patiently delivers her very well practiced lines. she makes sure i understand her point , hence would not hesitate to make me understand in three languages.
I never hear her elsewhere, in the market, down the lane, near the old school , across the street , in the movies or the interviews.
I never hear her elsewhere, in the market, down the lane, near the old school , across the street , in the movies or the interviews.
My emotions are her identity , when i am happy she is calm, when i am sad she is cruel when i am angry she is annoying . .
my pocket is her availability when i am broke i hear her . you do not have sufficient balance to call the dialled number........
8 comments:
i like your style its very authentic and original, good luck :)
i like your style its original and authentic , good luck :)
Excellent..... Truly amazing narration... Great post. Hope to see more.
Nice.. can do better with the grammar & language influx ...
Superb.
You narrated in a good style.
Keep it up.
And always recharge your phone so that you don't have to hear "you do not have"
ARJUN MS
INDIA
Thanks for all your valuable inputs ..
I do not feel there is any serious error in Grammar or Syntax. It happens in loose Prose or Poetry. Language grows by mistakes and experiments. It is not Victorian or Chaucer age to think about it. Let the thoughts flow free as long as you understand. Writing by Grammar some times is like Cooking by keeping a book on Cookery by your side...
I loved the last line....:)You can see things differently.When you see what others can't see.That's creativity.
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